OMG! WTF? Dudette, what's up with all the sad cheating stories lately??? o_0? Whatever happened to HAPPY Jordan!TMNT!Verse where everyone lived happily ever after with thier rapist true love? And Michael and Leon happily fluffed away into the future?
Anyway, I did enjoy reading this fic, but I just have to say, THIS is what happens when you pair Mikey with Hun. Hun becomes a controlling and abusive pimp and forces Mikey to go out and whore himself out (not to say I wouldn't be one of Mikey's paying customers ;) Just saying... XD
Ok, now onto the few flubs I found (you KNEW I'd find them, it's ME after all) 1. "Leon took a deep breath to calm him before he" shouldn't it be "to calm himself"? 2. "Mikey had striped Leon and" striped should be stripped, unless Mikey's painting stripes on Leon or something ;) 3. "were they the ones who scared you?" - I think this is supposed to be scarred, not scared, right?? o_O If it IS supposed to be scared, then I'm VERY confused... scared??
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rapisttrue love? And Michael and Leon happily fluffed away into the future?Anyway, I did enjoy reading this fic, but I just have to say, THIS is what happens when you pair Mikey with Hun. Hun becomes a controlling and abusive pimp and forces Mikey to go out and whore himself out (not to say I wouldn't be one of Mikey's paying customers ;) Just saying... XD
Ok, now onto the few flubs I found (you KNEW I'd find them, it's ME after all)
1. "Leon took a deep breath to calm him before he" shouldn't it be "to calm himself"?
2. "Mikey had striped Leon and" striped should be stripped, unless Mikey's painting stripes on Leon or something ;)
3. "were they the ones who scared you?" - I think this is supposed to be scarred, not scared, right?? o_O If it IS supposed to be scared, then I'm VERY confused... scared??