http://carmontoya13.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] carmontoya13.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aloneindarknes7 2011-01-31 01:16 am (UTC)

Oh wow these were so heartbreaking! I liked the way you fit the memory/flash back into the first drabble. Usually authors do something annoying when they try to do a memory/flash back like actually write "Start Flash Back" and "End Flash Back." And then the RaphLeo fic described their relationship perfectly, I thought. But that last one was so sad! I hated that Casey died in SAINW and thinking that he died to protect Raph like that is such a sad thought!

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